11/20/2022, 11:06 AMI kinda wanted to focus more on the action and gestures a bit more in this strip. This... is probably one of my least wordy strips actually.
11/20/2022, 11:26 AMGod, so many emotions in this page. I'm glad you went and dwelled on the immediate aftermath of the situation with this page. Everything about it is really effective. Kenzie sort of trying to apologize and then just getting overwhelmed and running away feels right. And then you got Kaiden literally having a breakdown in the background which is really sad to see, but then Morgan comes to his rescue in that last panel which is nice.
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