Him, Her, And Them: The Tiny David Story - Message Failed To Send

12/4/2022

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View Transcript Hannah: AND THEN YOU *SLAPPED* HIM!?
KENZIE WHAT THE *FUCK*!?
Kenzie: I WAS PISSED!
IT WAS ALL I COULD THINK OF!

Kenzie: I mean imagine if this happened to *you* while you were still dating Brad!
You'd do it too!

Hannah: That's... literally *exactly* what Brad did.
But Tiny David isn't anywhere *close* to Brad.

Hannah: I mean, I'd think he woulda...
...texted...

Hannah: ...back. Kenz, when was the last time you actually *looked* at your texts with TD?

Kenzie: ...well he never responded so not since I showed Morgyn and Lydia.
Hannah: Well maybe you should double check to see if that text...
...*actually sent*.

Kenzie: ...*no*...

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Author Notes

12/4/2022, 12:28 PM Hey look, a seven panel strip, that's the most I've put on a single page! Also yay Hannah's back!

I like a lot about this page, the colors, the poses, Kenzie's expressions, it's all pretty damn good.

Comments:

12/4/2022, 1:20 PM Yeah, there's a lot of great things about this page! I really like the colors of the room. Very pastel. I also enjoy Kenzie's beet red face from her being so upset.

Oh no, now that she's realized the text never sent, she's getting even more upset. (And yay, Hannah!)
12/4/2022, 1:22 PM D'aww, thanks! I like how Kenzie's room came out too!

And yeah man, those emotions, they're... they're starting to get real complicated.
12/4/2022, 3:11 PM you're really good with the expressions, and I like that quivery little last bubble that says "no..." in small words, it's effective

Also you know, you have improved a ton, keep going DAVID!!
12/4/2022, 3:14 PM D'aww, thanks! Kenzie's little no was a fun panel to think through!